Boring ‘press releases’

Rant on.

When will YOU (FS) public relation people (do they really exist???) learn to write something more original to us news editors ? After more than 5 years at simFlight and 3 years at Avsim I am getting extremely and hopelessly bored by the continuous bloated texts that people submit us every day.

5 out of 10 PR’s start with the same wording…..

“XXX is proud to announce….” or “…. XXX released the long-awaited….”. Or even worse “XXX now released the eagerly awaited…”. Or how about this one: “… XXX published the much acclaimed….”.

Come on guys, how dumb do you think our readers are? THEY are getting bored too! And an only slightly critical reader may want to know ‘much acclaimed’ by whom !!?? Yourself, no doubt! And who decides if ‘we’ are ‘eagerly awaiting’ anything from you ? Sure, it may happen at times, but more often than not these sort of ‘hot air’ texts are being thrown on to us by the most obscure of ‘companies’ in the business… ones that often have only one or two products out.

Oh, and yes, WE are proud of our achievements too (although often getting them on the market causes more headaches than joy) but do we need to go around and tell the world that we’re so proud of ourselves? Nope. So why do you !?? There are enough ‘egos’ in this crummy world already!

So, to make life for us editors AND readers just a tad more enjoyable, why not change your publicity blurbs to something more original?? Here are a few examples for you:

“XXXX knows you have not been waiting for this, but we still thought to publish the new ‘product x’. See if it fits your stable, who knows? Available here…”

or

“We at XXX got so bored lately that we decided to make a new product after all, and since we can’t just use it for our own pleasure we’re offering it for sale here….”

Perhaps not brilliant, but more akin to the truth and it just MIGHT attract MORE ATTENTION than the boring and inflated ‘proud and eagerly’ bunch of bloated PR’s.

Rant off.

That’s my thought for the weekend for ya! Come to think of it, I’ll try some of my own medicine, too. After all, I’m a FS PR bloke (for hire!) myself.

Have a great one!

One thought on “Boring ‘press releases’

  • Sunday, May 18, 2008 at 22:40
    Permalink

    PR releases – interesting stuff…

    I have to say that while unoriginal, highly anticipated and much acclaimed are good items to have in your PR. Having said that you should only write that if your products indeed are and in that case you can probably be more specific. These 2 attributes are popular because they demonstrate credibility (ie why should I believe you?) – although 95% of writers probably just copy other PR releases without being aware what they are writing and therefore releasing dull and boring material…

    In regards to my own PR releases, I like to spice things up, but avsim is a really big offender in rewriting PR releases to something very boring.

Leave a Reply

Most Popular

On Key

Related Posts

Shop not ready yet

I have been working on and off to get the shop part of my blog working. I am using WooCommerce now that ‘ Shopify’ is just too much for the remaining few products. But as always with these modular things,

Railways in the Second World War

Railways in the Second World War By Michael Foley I am not a railwayman by any measure, although my brother and I built an extensive model railway back in the day. But what caught my curiosity was the cover of

Basic Blender Tutorials

Downloaded the latest Blender app and was looking for tutorials. This is the list that Blender provides themselves. There must be many more on Youtube and I’ll post more of them when I find them.My main project is to build

Independence Pass, CO, 2016

Independence Pass, CO, 2016 September 1, 2016US travel Not only the Dutchy, in fact, but a whole bunch of people from the “Kachadourian Lodge” set out to visit the pass, and subsequently have lunch in Aspen on the other side!

%d bloggers like this: